Painful memories Debby. I admire the strength you have to share these difficult times with us. I also think that being able to share these life stories has had a very positive effect on your life.
I do think A is the most powerful way to start this. Drops us right into the action and is a good inciting incident in the sense that it sets everything in motion. The deeper storyworthy problem soon emerges which is this interesting juxtaposition of what happened with your father and what was happening with your son. I'm looking forward to reading the way you make art of all of this.
Painful memories Debby. I admire the strength you have to share these difficult times with us. I also think that being able to share these life stories has had a very positive effect on your life.
Thank you, Susan—definitely sharing these stories helps me, and I surely do appreciate the feedback.
I do think A is the most powerful way to start this. Drops us right into the action and is a good inciting incident in the sense that it sets everything in motion. The deeper storyworthy problem soon emerges which is this interesting juxtaposition of what happened with your father and what was happening with your son. I'm looking forward to reading the way you make art of all of this.
I'm looking forward to figuring it out!!
Thanks, Jill!
Wow. Powerful writing
Love and hugs, Debbie.
Sending you love and hugs, Debby ❤